MY FIRST MUSIC VIDEO.......... Enjoy. Feedback anybody?

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I'm the guy with the "Tony Stark mental, __ Iron Man pistol -- This a Marvelous issue" outfit on
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damn Paul Wall got mad fat.. i see he still posted like a stop sign tho.





DAmn Rilla that video sucked looked like it took place in 2002. the songs aight tho. yall dudes need to step ya fashion up in the middle of da map. karate kidfitted was not a good look.
 
Originally Posted by anDown Goes Frasier

damn Paul Wall got mad fat.. i see he still posted like a stop sign tho.





DAmn Rilla that video sucked looked like it took place in 2002. the songs aight tho. yall dudes need to step ya fashion up in the middle of da map. karate kid fitted was not a good look.
I'm not gonna lie, I'm dyin of that comment, but yea, the song is
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The video could've been better but hey you gotta start somewhere.
 
Keep tryin'. Y'all really need to step the fashion game up though. I expected better from you Rilla.
 
My fashion game? lookee here __, I ain't one of these "swag splashin" lames. Furthermore, I'm far from a sneaker head or"fashionado". What you're looking at is a __ with a Iron Man tee on over a black hoody in some Roc-aWear jeans....solely because Ilike Iron Man, black hoodies, and Roc-a-wear jeans. That's all. %!$! making a "statement". I ain't trying to impress __swith my clothes...what for? The last time I check, I could still rhyme....if that even matters. Wanna talk about expectations? __ Iexpected more from a bunch of men than 3 half assed Sex In The City/What Not To Wear %#! comments. That's just real talk, I ain't even mad. With thatsaid, I appreciate the feedback thus far.
 
The track is tuff.

The content of the video was cool...but it look like the cameraman had Parkinsons. Still not bad though...If the footage was a lil cleaner...s_ woulda beensupa straight. Why y'all ain't use a tripod?

Shorty in the silver was proper tho...who dat is?
 
Originally Posted by Ricardo Malta

This some BET Uncut material fam.
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Shorty in the silver top was
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. I dust that kitty off.

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at the fashion comments.
 
I ain't even gonna lie moe.....the song was flames. Everybody came correct. Thats some s_ I would actually bump. Y'all put on for y'all city withthat track.

Video was a lil shaky though.
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Originally Posted by DearWinter219

My fashion game? lookee here __, I ain't one of these "swag splashin" lames. Furthermore, I'm far from a sneaker head or "fashionado". What you're looking at is a __ with a Iron Man tee on over a black hoody in some Roc-aWear jeans....solely because I like Iron Man, black hoodies, and Roc-a-wear jeans. That's all. %!$! making a "statement". I ain't trying to impress __s with my clothes...what for? The last time I check, I could still rhyme....if that even matters. Wanna talk about expectations? __ I expected more from a bunch of men than 3 half assed Sex In The City/What Not To Wear %#! comments. That's just real talk, I ain't even mad. With that said, I appreciate the feedback thus far.


Slow down Rilla, it ain't that serious. Your verse was tight, wasn't really feeling the chick or the other dude though. It was a lil too southern forme on the chorus though. The only reason I'm talking about fashion is because presentation means a lot in a video.
 
Originally Posted by abeautifulhaze

I ain't even gonna lie moe.....the song was flames. Everybody came correct. Thats some s_ I would actually bump. Y'all put on for y'all city with that track.

Video was a lil shaky though.
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@%*$ you.... thanks bro
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Originally Posted by worldbeefreeg

Originally Posted by DearWinter219

My fashion game? lookee here __, I ain't one of these "swag splashin" lames. Furthermore, I'm far from a sneaker head or "fashionado". What you're looking at is a __ with a Iron Man tee on over a black hoody in some Roc-aWear jeans....solely because I like Iron Man, black hoodies, and Roc-a-wear jeans. That's all. %!$! making a "statement". I ain't trying to impress __s with my clothes...what for? The last time I check, I could still rhyme....if that even matters. Wanna talk about expectations? __ I expected more from a bunch of men than 3 half assed Sex In The City/What Not To Wear %#! comments. That's just real talk, I ain't even mad. With that said, I appreciate the feedback thus far.


Slow down Rilla, it ain't that serious. Your verse was tight, wasn't really feeling the chick or the other dude though. It was a lil too southern for me on the chorus though. The only reason I'm talking about fashion is because presentation means a lot in a video.
That's a Hi-DEF statement right there and it's 1000% true, but damn... it takes a lot to get Hype Williams to Dir. your *+##. Youcan't POSSIBLY expect my FIRST video to compete with the stuff you're used to...just yet
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... can you?
 
Originally Posted by DearWinter219

Originally Posted by worldbeefreeg

Originally Posted by DearWinter219

My fashion game? lookee here __, I ain't one of these "swag splashin" lames. Furthermore, I'm far from a sneaker head or "fashionado". What you're looking at is a __ with a Iron Man tee on over a black hoody in some Roc-aWear jeans....solely because I like Iron Man, black hoodies, and Roc-a-wear jeans. That's all. %!$! making a "statement". I ain't trying to impress __s with my clothes...what for? The last time I check, I could still rhyme....if that even matters. Wanna talk about expectations? __ I expected more from a bunch of men than 3 half assed Sex In The City/What Not To Wear %#! comments. That's just real talk, I ain't even mad. With that said, I appreciate the feedback thus far.


Slow down Rilla, it ain't that serious. Your verse was tight, wasn't really feeling the chick or the other dude though. It was a lil too southern for me on the chorus though. The only reason I'm talking about fashion is because presentation means a lot in a video.
That's a Hi-DEF statement right there and it's 1000% true, but damn... it takes a lot to get Hype Williams to Dir. your *+##. You can't POSSIBLY expect my FIRST video to compete with the stuff you're used to...just yet
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... can you?


Na, not at al.. I actualyy like the shots in the video, for the most part. I know you ain't a flashy dude at all but I thought you would do it up a li'for the video.
 
^Hold on, hold bro, AYYYYE! I don't "go for " a sound. [Sam] __ this is how I talk! [/Sam]. a lot of peoplejust don't realize how normal the midwest sounds. In the south, they say we sound east coast btw. Think about that for a second. The midwest hasthe least accent of all actually.

One time for the man we love to hate
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. My man TIME with the blessing of a lifetime. Where I'm from again?

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Originally Posted by Ricardo Malta

This some BET Uncut material fam.




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so true,

keep doin ya thang though Rilla, like you said it was your first video, @%+$ aint going to be perfect.

the rhymes were on point too
 
Video was kind of hard to watch....more varied locales...a camera with steadyshot...maybe one of the HD joints...that would all help.

But the song was straight, homie at the end killed it.
 
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worldbeefreeg wrote:

Originally Posted by DearWinter219

Originally Posted by worldbeefreeg

Originally Posted by DearWinter219

My fashion game? lookee here __, I ain't one of these "swag splashin" lames. Furthermore, I'm far from a sneaker head or "fashionado". What you're looking at is a __ with a Iron Man tee on over a black hoody in some Roc-aWear jeans....solely because I like Iron Man, black hoodies, and Roc-a-wear jeans. That's all. %!$! making a "statement". I ain't trying to impress __s with my clothes...what for? The last time I check, I could still rhyme....if that even matters. Wanna talk about expectations? __ I expected more from a bunch of men than 3 half assed Sex In The City/What Not To Wear %#! comments. That's just real talk, I ain't even mad. With that said, I appreciate the feedback thus far.


Slow down Rilla, it ain't that serious. Your verse was tight, wasn't really feeling the chick or the other dude though. It was a lil too southern for me on the chorus though. The only reason I'm talking about fashion is because presentation means a lot in a video.
That's a Hi-DEF statement right there and it's 1000% true, but damn... it takes a lot to get Hype Williams to Dir. your *+##. You can't POSSIBLY expect my FIRST video to compete with the stuff you're used to...just yet
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... can you?


Na, not at al.. I actualyy like the shots in the video, for the most part. I know you ain't a flashy dude at all but I thought you would do it up a li' for the video.
I banged w/ it. Dude at the end made me pretty dizzy w/ the circle
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I think the cameraman shoulda zoomed out a lil for the other artists. Hewas close. Other than that and the style (I'm a sneakerhead, sue me
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) It was hot. That's def a put on for ya city track. I'd def bang that inthe wheel but couldn't rap it cause I'm from PA
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Good job brah
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I agree it looks like something off of Uncut but the song was good unlike all of the $#!! you see on there. Good stuff man, keep it up.

- Tical.
 
Originally Posted by Dathbgboy

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worldbeefreeg wrote:

Originally Posted by DearWinter219

Originally Posted by worldbeefreeg

Originally Posted by DearWinter219

My fashion game? lookee here __, I ain't one of these "swag splashin" lames. Furthermore, I'm far from a sneaker head or "fashionado". What you're looking at is a __ with a Iron Man tee on over a black hoody in some Roc-aWear jeans....solely because I like Iron Man, black hoodies, and Roc-a-wear jeans. That's all. %!$! making a "statement". I ain't trying to impress __s with my clothes...what for? The last time I check, I could still rhyme....if that even matters. Wanna talk about expectations? __ I expected more from a bunch of men than 3 half assed Sex In The City/What Not To Wear %#! comments. That's just real talk, I ain't even mad. With that said, I appreciate the feedback thus far.


Slow down Rilla, it ain't that serious. Your verse was tight, wasn't really feeling the chick or the other dude though. It was a lil too southern for me on the chorus though. The only reason I'm talking about fashion is because presentation means a lot in a video.
That's a Hi-DEF statement right there and it's 1000% true, but damn... it takes a lot to get Hype Williams to Dir. your *+##. You can't POSSIBLY expect my FIRST video to compete with the stuff you're used to...just yet
nerd.gif
... can you?


Na, not at al.. I actualyy like the shots in the video, for the most part. I know you ain't a flashy dude at all but I thought you would do it up a li' for the video.
I banged w/ it. Dude at the end made me pretty dizzy w/ the circle
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I think the cameraman shoulda zoomed out a lil for the other artists. He was close. Other than that and the style (I'm a sneakerhead, sue me
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) It was hot. That's def a put on for ya city track. I'd def bang that in the wheel but couldn't rap it cause I'm from PA
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Good job brah
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Preciate the love guys... I'm almost teary eyed over hear. I feel like, one day, just maybe, I could be NT's next Jewels.
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This just in, 2 of NT's dopest producers agree, Rilla makes " it was aight" or better music. Yay me! More importantly, wait...Time is beingagreeable?!? WHAT?

Tell ya mans go go 'head w/ them salt and pepper jewels though.

I know it was for the vid (or maybe he does it like that all the time) but them *%%+'s looked fu-ga-ga. *%%+'s was not dancing. [Killa Mike] Bang......Bang [Killa Mike]
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Aye... I'll tell you what... YOU tell him andI'll just laugh.
 
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