MY FIRST RAP VIDEO ON YOUTUBE, WOULD LOVE SOME FEEDBACK

this was ill b. i really rocks with this. ain't even really gotta give any criticism, cuz it's easy to tell you take this seriously. and if that really is the case, improvements all around your rap game will just naturally come as you continue to work hard. :pimp:
 
NT stamp of approval 
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You have the chance to be something big when the game gets back on the right path. Keep it up youngn, never stop flowing, you have to be ready when the opportunity presents itself.
 
seriously that was at least 459 times better than i was expecting. on all levels. video production was dope. beats were dope. rhymes were dope. keep us on NT updated.
 
this was ill b. i really rocks with this. ain't even really gotta give any criticism, cuz it's easy to tell you take this seriously. and if that really is the case, improvements all around your rap game will just naturally come as you continue to work hard.
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thanks for the feedback 
 
You got it homie. Real ****. From an older head that's been ******* with hip hop since the EPMD.

You came off official, so stay grounded and focused and when you get on, shout out NT.






One more thing man. Don't EVER sign no cot damn 360. Carve your own lane. It'll take longer, but it'll make you your own man.
 
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You got it homie. Real ****. From an older head that's been ******* with hip hop since the EPMD.

You came off official, so stay grounded and focused and when you get on, shout out NT.






One more thing man. Don't EVER sign no cot damn 360. Carve your own lane. It'll take longer, but it'll make you your own man.
thanks for the feedback and will deff keep that in mind about the 360 deal 
thanks 
 
 
This Is my First Rap Video wanted to share it with my NT fams Rap is my second love after sneakers 

 

I mess with it, but you're so fundamental that labels can't afford you ...or to take the risk with your style. You need an effeminate dance, some fashion that resembles the 80's and 90's, and a bad haircut.

...also be proud of being a loser. If you don't have these qualities, you won't get signed or distributed. Dom Kennedy status until you're 40.


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I mess with it, but you're so fundamental that labels can't afford you ...or to take the risk with your style. You need an effeminate dance, some fashion that resembles the 80's and 90's, and a bad haircut.

...also be proud of being a loser. If you don't have these qualities, you won't get signed or distributed. Dom Kennedy status until you're 40.


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 ok thanks for the feedback 
 
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