Drake - U Wit Me? (Bar for Bar Breakdown)

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What's good. I'm Punsy. This is my first post here. I knew there was a music thread, so I signed up.

I did a bar for bar breakdown of U Wit Me? from Views.

I broke this down from a technical standpoint, looking at his flow, structure, rhyme schemes, etc.

I wanted to show aspiring writers some of the techniques that Drake used in the song. 

I have more planned and wanted to get some feedback.

I'm not trying to spam, I'm here to stay. I'm just looking for hip hop lovers and writers that are looking to grow.

If my interpretation of the track was wrong, please let me know. I'd love to hear everyone's interpretation.

 
I hear you guys. I don't think this song is deep at all. I was just making a statement through the breakdown. I'm a hip hop teacher and some of my students are intimidated by songs like these. They're under the impression that they aren't good enough because their style is different from this. Plus, Rap Genius doesn't allow me to analyze the syllable counts, verse structure and flows. Trust me, I tried. Those ****** suck sometimes. 
 
I would, but this breakdown isn't exactly in favor of Drake. I talk a bit of **** and they take it pretty hard.
Drake thread. I hate all day in there. It ain't a appreciation thread, it's just a place for everything drake.
 
Yes sir. If it's drake slander I'm bout to check it out and Rep u.
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OP I sure as hell didn't click play but I read this whole thread and noticed you said you have students right? Can you explain to me why I don't believe you for 1 second?
 
 
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OP I sure as hell didn't click play but I read this whole thread and noticed you said you have students right? Can you explain to me why I don't believe you for 1 second?
Sure! As external observer of an individual that you've never met, you rightfully assume that I'm making an attempt to market to you. I show up out of nowhere with a video and expect everyone individual present to accept me with open arms. I can understand your skepticism, but I must express, that I am, in fact, a rap teacher. I have courses online with a growing total of over 1,100 students. I'm just trying grow and eat baby. I'm sorry if my sudden appears offends you.
 
Can't even hate in peace without this ***** mentioning me.
 
Lmaoo a grown man posted this wow how pathetic ..and miss me with one of your corny drake Stan comments
Since you're a supporter of Drake, I have to ask you... and this is a dead serious question. Did you enjoy Views? Once again, serious question. I've listened to this project a few times through, and I thought it was lazy.
 
I couldn't even listen to Views it was so bad. I might try again in a couple months ,and I'm a Drake fan.
 
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