Check my song out, feedback appreciated

that wave

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What do I need to work on? and no I'm not going to quit so any feedback would be appreciated
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this is only my third track I've ever actually recorded, so I'm new in the game but been writing for a minute...

http://usershare.net/32hg25c6fwd5
 
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