Just recorded a fire track...

[aj23datsme]

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2. You sound corny as . You sound like a one of the nerds wit the roller backpacks back in high school that I used to kick over.

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[j skitzo]

OK....so first off

-NOT a freestyle...you know damn well you wrote that down.

-using a computer mic and recording an acapella DOES NOT EQUAL "just recorded a fire track."

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[golfalphabravoecho]

That's not a fire track. That's a freestyle. And it's closer to a poem than a rap. There's no real cohesive flow or melody you know what I mean. You set yourself up for failure with the title. To be honest you missed me with the comic book references because G.o.D. Jewels just did this on How To Rap. And frankly he did it much better.

But keep at it homie. Good luck. Maybe we'll see you on the next Mixtape.

Team Logic
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[militaryiv]

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2. You sound corny as . You sound like a one of the nerds wit the roller backpacks back in high school that I used to kick over.

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Team 4:20
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Free Chilly

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[newyawkremote]

Ahaha. Ol Jape' Killin N's.

But yeah my dude.....No bueno on your "Fire Track" straight Basura.

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