My Song...... Criticize the worst you can

aizensousuke

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http://www.zshare.net/audio/75069056298dec61/









So..... ME and my friends decided to make a little song tonight







We were drinking having a good ol time

Decided it didnt come out too bad so Im like, I need the harshest criticism and knew this was the best place

but plz try and keep it honest dont kill me now




im the first guy, second guy my cuzzo, 3rd brotherman my marine brother that came back alive










lemme know, its a GoCop thing and um.... we tryna do this
 
rapping


tryna keep it old school hip hop

no autotune and none of that none sense


I grew up on CREAM so I try.. u know
 
i'd rather listen to arab......... it dont get any worse than that.

this was terrible. it really sucked bad. like seriously. idk y u did this. just edit your thread and we'll pretend nothing ever happened.
 
Inebriated Rap
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It was ehh...sounds like some late 90's East Coast !%*@.

Who the #@*! cares about "bringin it back" and makin music for your homies...its all about makin it a hit. Unfortunately this isn't one of em.

If you wanna make it big in the industry you got to compete with who's hot now...
 
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