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Discussion in 'Music' started by certifiedflyboi23, Dec 20, 2009.
Tell me your likes and dislikes...
Freestyle.mp3 - 5.1 Mb
i think your bars arent bad but you need work on your delivery
its all confidence.. make these *!@!!% believe you... but keep at it doe
nice job riding the beat try to fit more words or bigger words in them bars and you good to go
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delivery got better since last time i peeped... u sound like a less sleepy chip tha ripper (no diss cuz i think dude sucks... im just talkin voice wise) ...lol
it was one spot towards the middle where it sounded like u was readin a lil bit (the emotion dropped off)... it was just a couple bars tho...
keep workin on it... definitely showin improvement...
Yea i know what you mean about the delivery.
Preciate the feedback
I ain't mad @ u family keep doin you there's this cat named berretta simmons who's nice from the zone too
hahahahaha!!! who are you bro!! lol
i will choose to retain anonymity i rap too and i grew up in the same city as you
bro dont do me like that. hit me up man
This was okay. Wouldn't hurt if you switched up flows, slowed it down spit up like half way through. Experiment with wordplay. Aint no shame in trying tomimic some of your fav rappers at first to mold your own style.
Lyrics were good. Aint a Forbes list that can find what my worth is Shoulda had that Ric flair WHOOOO ad lib when you mentioned him
Joint dragged a lil in the end.
it was smooooothh