NT,check out my verses to Dead Presidents!

Discussion in 'Music' started by jrocknikerock, Dec 17, 2009.

  1. jrocknikerock

    jrocknikerock

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    Wussup NT im a rapper/singer from Houston,Texas. Just trying to get my music out there and move ahead in the music industry. Hope you like it. Been rappin formaybe a year now. Started writing not so long ago, started off just freestyling. Completed a 12 track mixtape this year, which you can listen to most of themat the myspace link below. Just me going on a bunch of popular beats that i like. I need to start making my own beats.

    You can check out my music at

    Myspace.com/TLeeDaMc

    or my Youtube.

    Comments are appreciated. I'm Asian,if that matters.



    Thanks NT check the ending of the vid[​IMG]
     
  2. certifiedflyboi23

    certifiedflyboi23

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    You sound like ur reading...

    plus..

    If you hop on a beat like Dead Presidents you gotta come harder(pause)
     
  3. ham city

    ham city Banned

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    *cues last 30 seconds of J. Cole's "Lights Please"*
     
  4. dreamhigh

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    ohhhhh nooooo nothing personal but uh uh [​IMG]
     
  5. jrocknikerock

    jrocknikerock

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    CertifiedFlyBoi2 i see what you mean.

    and dream high... ignorant comment.
     
  6. burt reynoldz

    burt reynoldz

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    No bueno
     
  7. naughtywon

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    lol ur doubles aint sposed to b that damn loud...

    u suck...

    dont rhyme fad sad and had...

    step it up big time or quit...
     
  8. Master Zik

    Master Zik

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    [​IMG]Stop.
     
  9. imreallydirknowitzki

    imreallydirknowitzki

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    Very Monotone, you need to change up your delivery and get some energy.
     
  10. miketysonthekiller

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    You sound mad monotone brah. PUT SOME FEELING ON THAT $!%!.
     
  11. lilstarz07

    lilstarz07 Banned

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    stopped it after "limelight alright, alright" ...
     
  12. clevelandsprince23

    clevelandsprince23 Banned

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    Yep yep you sounded monotone as @$%! man... still ok tho [​IMG] keep doin' your thing man 713 ya heardddddddddd
     
  13. thejrob

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    Your voice is real monotune
    Your rhymes are real simple
    Your word play is non existent

    With that being said keep it up man, if its what you like to do then keep working on it...
     
  14. domc03

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    you have a voice made for writing...
     
  15. moeree5e

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    i hear what you did there
     
  16. bluedeniro

    bluedeniro

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    theres a book called the art of rapping i gave my lil cousin you should buy that book withing a year you'll be rapping like lil zane
     
  17. playoff12

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    I like the meaning behind the song and keep doing your thang homie.

    Throw in some emotion, attitude, and a touch of swag and it'd be dope. [​IMG]
     
  18. jrocknikerock

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    dam...i see what yall mean.

    Delivery has always been my big weakness. Another thing is the quality. The low budget studio doesn't have the mic personally mixed for me.
    So I always sound low and not how I actually sound. smh. But again I need to work on the sound of it all. Thanks NT.

    I was on the phone with a upcoming record label the other day and they're gonna listen to my mixtape and if they like me, they will let me start makingsongs in their high quality master studio. If I get on, I'll redo the song forsure.

    Thanks for the comments NT,appreciated.