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i need feedback
Do you like my music video? [NEED FEEDBACK]
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this video is nice... the song got a dope beat i just hate how simple the rhyme scheme is
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The spam in this forum is getting crazy.
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It'll only get worse. Most hated forum on NT by the mods/admins, they'll let it happen.
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**** it I'm bout to start rapping
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Hey what's up im Nana.
Thanks for your input.
I've been rapping for a while now and I still have a lot to learn and work on as an artist.
My flow is the main thing I need to work on and I plan to improve over 2014.
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Its aint bad, but it aint good, its ehh.
Nice jacket.
Nice jacket.
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This video is cool but I finished watching and didn't get anything from it.
The song lacked drive/emotion. You sound uninterested. Are you trying to grab the interest of your listeners or bore them to death? Serious question.
Another thing I'd like to point out is the fact that it seems that you didn't put a lot of effort into the video over all. It didn't tell a story. What I'm trying to say here is that both your song and your visual come off as lackluster and you should really rethink what it means to be an "entertainer" if Rap is what you'd like to use as a source of income.
Much success to you, but I see this as more of a phase/hobby for you.
The song lacked drive/emotion. You sound uninterested. Are you trying to grab the interest of your listeners or bore them to death? Serious question.
Another thing I'd like to point out is the fact that it seems that you didn't put a lot of effort into the video over all. It didn't tell a story. What I'm trying to say here is that both your song and your visual come off as lackluster and you should really rethink what it means to be an "entertainer" if Rap is what you'd like to use as a source of income.
Much success to you, but I see this as more of a phase/hobby for you.
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I appreciate your input.
I actually found your criticism to be helpful.
You are completely right about the video not telling a story.
My theme for this particular video is "Rain".
The donuts where random and the storyline was pretty weak.
I have a lot to work on but I'm motivated to become a succesful artist.
Also keep in mind this is my first music video ever.
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A- for effort, keep chasing that dream like a track star.
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No doubt, that's what it's all about at this point in your career if you choose to continue this full time. Taking all things into consideration you definitely have the tools to succeed and also possess the vision.
My only other suggestion moving forward is to hone those points we spoke about and aim for visuals with more compelling or interesting narratives homie. (I can't comment on your music any further than this one video/song because it's all I've heard and maybe you have some really great songs that I'm just not aware of at the moment.)
Continue posting up your work and keep at it. Based on how you responded, your drive shows and I wish you the best. Looking forward to seeing your progression.
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I hear you man, I won't stop.
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A month later and I'm at 2,650+ views thanks for all the support Niketalk .
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Fresh Campus Adidas are Fresh.
Dope beat.
Good start dude.
Dope beat.
Good start dude.
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OP here back with another video
Thanks
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