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Hey what's up im Nana.this video is nice... the song got a dope beat i just hate how simple the rhyme scheme is
I appreciate your input.This video is cool but I finished watching and didn't get anything from it.
The song lacked drive/emotion. You sound uninterested. Are you trying to grab the interest of your listeners or bore them to death? Serious question.
Another thing I'd like to point out is the fact that it seems that you didn't put a lot of effort into the video over all. It didn't tell a story. What I'm trying to say here is that both your song and your visual come off as lackluster and you should really rethink what it means to be an "entertainer" if Rap is what you'd like to use as a source of income.
Much success to you, but I see this as more of a phase/hobby for you.
I appreciate your input.
I actually found your criticism to be helpful.
You are completely right about the video not telling a story.
My theme for this particular video is "Rain".
The donuts where random and the storyline was pretty weak.
I have a lot to work on but I'm motivated to become a succesful artist.
Also keep in mind this is my first music video ever.