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We had to shoot a 3 min clip with a whole bunch of pre-selected scenes. It's random and completely pointless but it was fun working on it. I still have aweek for more editing time so feel free to critique.
Allow me to share my video project for class *Featuring my girl
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damn you got a nice whip, crib and chick....I envy!
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pretty structured fr something thats meant to be random...you got some nice night shots goin on in there.
some of the cuts are a bit jerky and a few of 1st person shots are a bit busted but part from that its alrite.
by the way, what was you shooting with?
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Not bad. But the lighting was awful when she came out of the house. Edit out a couple of unneeded scenes and it should be good.
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why does she go from lacing up her sneakers to having sandles on?
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it's a little too obvious that all of the chase car scenes are shot in the same parking lot. (looks like a Target parking lot)
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still love your girl
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This
Also, she doesn't wear socks?
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whats the name of all the intrumentals?
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Girl
Crib
Whip
Rating:
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NEVERMIND.
Nice video, looks good to me.
Nice video, looks good to me.
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She wears socks, the scene i was supposed to shoot was her putting on slippers so i had to improvise. There's a whole lot inconsistencies if you payattention. The project was just to make sure we knew how to use the camera, the teacher doesn't really care about all the extra stuff.
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first one is lil rob summer nights 2nd id biz markie make the music with your mouth(i think) 3rd is everyday i'm hustlin by rick ross
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The video contained a hot chick's feet.
"Thumbs" up.
"Thumbs" up.
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The 2nd Instrumental is Best of Me- Jay-Z and Mya. From 1:45-1:47 there seems to be someone in the passenger seat.
What's up with that?
What's up with that?
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And the last shot she hits the dude/kid and its night, but gets out the car and its day.
Either way,
Either way,
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Originally Posted by romedadude
The 2nd Instrumental is Best of Me- Jay-Z and Mya. From 1:45-1:47 there seems to be someone in the passenger seat.
What's up with that?
my lil sis wanted to ride... lol, I will end up editing her out.
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nice work shoxbb4
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I agree nice girl. car, and cribOriginally Posted by Jetpacunlimited
Girl
Crib
Whip
Rating:out of
bishopds
Banned
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she looks like she gives good dome.
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WORD!
-theres someone in the passenger seat at the 1:48 mark
-camera job could be done better
-shoes to sandles (?)
-night time to day time (?)
-IMO 'best of me' would be better if it faded out, and you should choose a better song than 'hustlin' something like a cruising song, somethingthat would fit her 'rich' lifestyle, like rnb or something not like rick ross, if that makes sense....
-IMO you should show her getting distracted first, then her noticing the guy, then hitting the brakes (but i dont know what your trying to show)
and what city were you driving around at?
looks familiar....
nice work though,
best of luck on this project!
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thought there would be more hate seeing how this is NT and all.
But anyway damn bruh i want your life. Fine girl, nice house, nice whip, damn man u living the dream
But anyway damn bruh i want your life. Fine girl, nice house, nice whip, damn man u living the dream
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not really... the whip/crib is property of my pop's. I'm a broke +%* college student
