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[thetrackstar]

http://www.4shared.com/au...k3f8y/The_beginning.html

 

[thetrackstar]

http://www.4shared.com/au...k3f8y/The_beginning.html

 

[lil smitty]

Work on your breathing and punch when you need to because you sounded like you were suffocating under those long phrases. Things like that come with time though. Other than that I'd say keep working on writing, lyrically it seemed forced in a few places. Make it more natural, your music should sound like an extension of yourself through your voice and i didn't get that from this track.

 

[lil smitty]

Work on your breathing and punch when you need to because you sounded like you were suffocating under those long phrases. Things like that come with time though. Other than that I'd say keep working on writing, lyrically it seemed forced in a few places. Make it more natural, your music should sound like an extension of yourself through your voice and i didn't get that from this track.

 

[thetrackstar]

Thanks for the advice i will take it and put it into work.

 

[thetrackstar]

Thanks for the advice i will take it and put it into work.