Helladown Vol. I made a blog like Niketalk told me to 5 years ago

[hyper cutter]

Heyo

It's been years since i've posted this frequently or been in here regularly.

In the mean time, lots has happened. Lots of good and lots of bad.

Anyway, recently I became certified as a personal trainer and will be trying to get my own private training business off the ground in the coming year.

But I also started a blog. So I'm trying to stay busy with a lot of stuff.

Check it out my ninjas and chime in. Only have two posts so far but at least I finally found a format I like.

Appreciate any support.

http://helladown.wordpress.com/

 

[zapatohead408]

didn't like it fam.

 

[hyper cutter]

the content or the style?

content is gonna get more diverse, obviously. only got two pieces.

style, i'm eventually gonna get shorter on the prose.

these are practice pieces, really.

preciate it nonetheless.

 

[elcatfisho]

blog posts read like a broken essay, it is a start.

 

[waitwut]

blog posts read like a broken essay, it is a start.

this it needs work but it isnt bad OP just work on the format.

 

[hyper cutter]

Blog posts aren't essays though. Otherwise they would be essays.

It's diary stuff.

I don't know. I guess being from SF I want my blog to avoid reading like a foreward to a book.

Aiming more for a formless hipster style blog I guess.

But thanks bros. I'm rounding back into shape with my prose and will be getting quicker to the points.

 

[Ox.]

stopped reading after the word hella.

 

[timbo109]

"There is an interesting polemic at steak here"

 

[hyper cutter]

Yeah yeah.

Thanks for catching that. Then laughing so much in real life about it...

I forgot nt isn't about positivity so I assume that's the extent of your contribution.

Aite well I don't expect much else on here so I don't think I'll be back to respond to any other posts.

 

[SC kid]

If u live in sf u should take more pics of your city

honestly the blogs I bookmark have more pics than words. If u have a good/interesting pic it says a thousand words.

like the "neo san Francisco" post for ex
you could have just said "I live where the yuppies party"
Then pictures and thats it.

But thats just my opinion. Props for puttin yourself out there tho.

 

[Ox.]

Yeah yeah.

Thanks for catching that. Then laughing so much in real life about it...

I forgot nt isn't about positivity so I assume that's the extent of your contribution.

Aite well I don't expect much else on here so I don't think I'll be back to respond to any other posts.

get a diary.

 

[offbad]

took you 5 years to write two posts?

 

[Mark Antony]

I'll read, personal training is probably something I'll look to do in the future.

 

[water]

"There is an interesting polemic at steak here"

 
took you 5 years to write two posts?

 at both of these posts. I don't follow blogs so......... I don't know what to critique. 

I do like the layout though. 

 

[dankenstien88]

took you 5 years to write two posts?


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[hyper cutter]

I like how those of y'all without fathers got something to say.

What's up what y'all got with y'all spare time homies

Yeah go ahead and finish those sweet junior college classes homies

 

[hyper cutter]

Bet y'all say something

 

[Gordonson]

Fatherless jokes.

Yeah, your jimmies were rustled

 

[hyper cutter]

Your mother