Hottest Song of 2010: Jey-Hard "Water Cup" New Generation Stand up! -$

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Haven't been on here in  while. Just recently got the copyright for the song. Took about 4 months to write it. But here it is.. the debut single from Jey-Hard.. "Water Cup."
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Thats good you remember me. But you'll know me when I smash ya mother. -$
 

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No one is feeling this, why do you continue to pass it off as "hot"? That's a terrible marketing strategy. Try harder with the music, or don't come at all.
 
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i would try to explain to you how terrible you are

but words cannot express the garbage that just entered my ears
 
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Took about 4 months to write it.


Seriously?

I mean it's not the best/worst track I've ever heard or anything but 4 months?

Really?

Why would you tell anyone that?


But on to the "constructive" criticism.

The beat is regular, and you get points for trying to flip or coin a new phrase. But I might suggest for you create a more dynamic video to accompany your song. I mean it's about a bangin shorty, maybe you put some bangin shorties in the vid.

The words don't particularly stand out to me either, but like I said it's not terrible.
 
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