My 1st track...lookin' for constructive criticism

Joined Jul 2, 2006
i know NT is the best place to get it cousin made the beat...recorded in my homies crib...thats me on the 1st verse
Joined Jan 2, 2010
u not bad at all... lyrics kinda simple but u was paintin a picture...

u got good mic presence...

flow wasnt fallin offbeat...

keep at it...
Joined Nov 20, 2007
It was okay. Work on your lyrics and wordplay, it's the way you'll get better. Everything else was solid.

I wasn't feeling the beat much but it wasn't bad at all.

The dude on the hook reminded me of Slug the way he did it.
Joined Jul 2, 2006
i appreciate the fact that you dudes took some time out of your day to listen to the track...and thanks for the feedback.
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