My 1st track...lookin' for constructive criticism

Jul 2, 2006
i know NT is the best place to get it cousin made the beat...recorded in my homies crib...thats me on the 1st verse
I actually thought it was good.
u not bad at all... lyrics kinda simple but u was paintin a picture...

u got good mic presence...

flow wasnt fallin offbeat...

keep at it...
It was okay. Work on your lyrics and wordplay, it's the way you'll get better. Everything else was solid.

I wasn't feeling the beat much but it wasn't bad at all.

The dude on the hook reminded me of Slug the way he did it.
i appreciate the fact that you dudes took some time out of your day to listen to the track...and thanks for the feedback.
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