nah

[notoriuswes]

just cause you hear trash aka radio hits doesnt mean its easy do you think to yourself that u couldve/wouldve made that trash?

yea its easy to rap but that dont mean ur stuff is gonna be hot...especially if you asking other people if you, yourself should rap

 

[truthgetsbusy]

Well....thanks for the feedback. I'm bout to record some stuff this weekend and post it. Stay tuned.

 

[brasilianmami]

Originally Posted by TruthGetsBusy


Well....thanks for the feedback. I'm bout to record some stuff this weekend and post it. Stay tuned.

 

[truthgetsbusy]

Tell me what you think......

http://www.zshare.net/audio/625849741708ae39/

And I know the quality is

so dont bother telling me

 

[akajae]

 

[the fresh king]

Originally Posted by TruthGetsBusy


Tell me what you think......

http://www.zshare.net/audio/625849741708ae39/

And I know the quality is

so dont bother telling me

Did you like record this with a phone?
Next to your speakers while the instrumental was playing?

 

[truthgetsbusy]

I'm illy freestyle...

http://www.zshare.net/audio/625878010a296e89/

 

[Master Zik]

This *$%*@ said bring it back

Why was ya flow like that on Day N Night? or ya voice? How old are you? Cuz this song is worse than the earlier Wes Duce songs and he got better in like 2years, so Imma say keep working and you might be better in 2 years.

@ I'm Illy. I've only heard the T.I. version once and bump TBI the most. I wanna tell you to stop rapping but just to critique you need to projectyour voice fam, you got the volume mad low on ya mic. Ya flow choppy. The lyrics aren't that good so work on ya rhymes.

Most importantly get a new recording program, get cool edit pro atleast. I'd rather listen to Eddo than you right about now.

*Plays How E. Stacks*

 

[i am knowledge]

 

[truthgetsbusy]

Originally Posted by Master Zik

This %$$%! said bring it back

Why was ya flow like that on Day N Night? or ya voice? How old are you? Cuz this song is worse than the earlier Wes Duce songs and he got better in like 2 years, so Imma say keep working and you might be better in 2 years.

@ I'm Illy. I've only heard the T.I. version once and bump TBI the most. I wanna tell you to stop rapping but just to critique you need to project your voice fam, you got the volume mad low on ya mic. Ya flow choppy. They lyrics aren't that good so work on ya rhymes.

Most importantly get a new recording program, get cool edit pro atleast. I'd rather listen to Eddo than you right about now.

*Plays How E. Stacks*

You don't wanna see the primative tools Im working with.....picture Tom Hanks buildin that raft on castway.

I'm spittin these straight thru too.

 

[haiti5]

u managed to sound worse than kidcudi

 

[liquidcream]

Originally Posted by TruthGetsBusy


Tell me what you think......

http://www.zshare.net/audio/625849741708ae39/

And I know the quality is

so dont bother telling me

 

[truthgetsbusy]

u managed to sound worse than kid cudi

when Zik questioned my flow I was wondering "Did KidCudi sound good on this?" but thats another story

told u it wasnt easy... chalk it up...

put me around some real recording software and and we willsee. Keep 2 things in mind....1. The quality is horrible cuz I didn't use a real program.....get over it. 2. I spit these straight thru....nobreaks....I didn't spit a little, mess up, jump back in where I ended. Naw just straight thru.

Do me a favor and actually listen to the words....there's some quotable/

lyrics in there but you guys wont get past the quality and actually listen to the words.

 

[cubs davinci]

Just work on it.

I got it somehow

 

[truthgetsbusy]

Originally Posted by iHateTimeDotCom

Originally Posted by TruthGetsBusy

u managed to sound worse than kid cudi

when Zik questioned my flow I was wondering "Did Kid Cudi sound good on this?" but thats another story

told u it wasnt easy... chalk it up...

put me around some real recording software and and we will see. Keep 2 things in mind....1. The quality is horrible cuz I didn't use a real program.....get over it. 2. I spit these straight thru....no breaks....I didn't spit a little, mess up, jump back in where I ended. Naw just straight thru.

Do me a favor and actually listen to the words....there's some quotable/

lyrics in there but you guys wont get past the quality and actually listen to the words.


dude i aint said nothin bout the quality... im talkin bout ur weak flow... u dont even sound like u believe a word u sayin... and it sound like u reading... that aint got nothin to do wit quality... they could throw ur +@$ in bassline tomorrow... same outcome... chalk it up and focus on something ur actually good at... no hate at all but to b 23 and sound like that this will not b a career for u...



I'll give you that...but like I said before this ain't sports...you can get better rapping in a matter of days if you try to improve.

I also find it funny that you talk down to EVERYbody in the music forum...like you P.Diddy or something. Until you on a XXL mag cover turn down your tone. The whole mad rapper act is getting old my friend. Go do some yoga or something.

 

[cubs davinci]

 

[nikfiend]

Originally Posted by iHateTimeDotCom

Originally Posted by TruthGetsBusy

Originally Posted by iHateTimeDotCom

Originally Posted by TruthGetsBusy

u managed to sound worse than kid cudi

when Zik questioned my flow I was wondering "Did Kid Cudi sound good on this?" but thats another story

told u it wasnt easy... chalk it up...

put me around some real recording software and and we will see. Keep 2 things in mind....1. The quality is horrible cuz I didn't use a real program.....get over it. 2. I spit these straight thru....no breaks....I didn't spit a little, mess up, jump back in where I ended. Naw just straight thru.

Do me a favor and actually listen to the words....there's some quotable/

lyrics in there but you guys wont get past the quality and actually listen to the words.

dude i aint said nothin bout the quality... im talkin bout ur weak flow... u dont even sound like u believe a word u sayin... and it sound like u reading... that aint got nothin to do wit quality... they could throw ur +@$ in bassline tomorrow... same outcome... chalk it up and focus on something ur actually good at... no hate at all but to b 23 and sound like that this will not b a career for u...

I'll give you that...but like I said before this ain't sports...you can get better rapping in a matter of days if you try to improve.

I also find it funny that you talk down to EVERYbody in the music forum...like you P.Diddy or something. Until you on a XXL mag cover turn down your tone. The whole mad rapper act is getting old my friend. Go do some yoga or something.
im not talkin down... im just keepin it real... u cant sugercoat +*%$ wit people no more cuz think its a damn compliment... and if u really believe u can improve in a matter of days then the best of luck to u... no mad rapper here... i just know talent (or lack of in ur case) when i hear it... ill leave it at that...


would you rather have people tell you that your musics hot when they really think its trash? use the criticism to your advantage my n_


btw:i agree with dude, all the excuses aside, its generally weak. you need more energy, but just practice and you'll be on your way

 

[henz0]

 

[notoriuswes]

i took criticism like him a couple years ago..Thank you jewels and DMV