NEW RAPPER on NT: BOBBY YALE

[m1dnightmobster]

What's up NT, now that I got your attention, I'm an amateur rapper and I recently wrote a song and I just wanted to get some feedback.
Keep in mind that I have a computer built-in mic and I'm using youtube instrumentals and I have no sound editing skills.

Here's the link

Bobby Yale - I Hate My Job

I know this is NT so I know what to expect

 

[m1dnightmobster]

 

[aka king arthur]

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

(for the title)

 

[you big dummy]

 

[m1dnightmobster]

 

[mosthated770]

fail

im not clicking link

 

[youngflykidchris]

i like the beat...

 

[scotthallwithapick]

I'll wait til Henz0 cosigns you

 

[aka king arthur]

i clicked the link and i say

are you serious bro?

i would booo you but i feel sorry for you

 

[m1dnightmobster]

I accept defeat. At least I'm not getting roasted like Wale.

 

[sighfur]

LOL, what is this?

You sound like a poindexter.

 

[notoriuswes]

Originally Posted by M1dnightMobster

I accept defeat. At least I'm not getting roasted like Wale.

 

[quiickz]

 

[luigitheking]

GOAT

 

[r0yalty]

You record this in the bath tub or something?

 

[vegashustla]

 

[chokeonsmoke]

 

[Master Zik]

Yo you know when something is so funny you don't even laugh but ya mouth is open like you want to laugh and it's just silence then you just make anoise like Ohhhaahhhhhaha

The choppy flow and accent is killing me. At least you rhymed fam. You can get better. Work on ya flow, record on something better. If you listen to rap, youshould know how w/e flow you're using should fit the beat. When you doing doubles and ad libs, they should not be as loud or louder than yourverse

.

 

[jordanhead2]

Really Nice Effort... but it sounds funny and I don't mean the quality.

 

[540jfan12]

 

[540jfan12]

Wait , is this dude an RD imitator?

 

[jpioneer]

 

[cjgenius368]

ya'll are harsh.

Yale student?

edit: just got to the spelling part...

 

[noslickremarks]

you rapping through one of these

?

 

[bonafide hustla]

man how u gone steal RD's entire style. dudes aint even start rapping completely off beat till RD started puttin yall on. fam you a biter not a writer.