NT, I Need Your Help! (Seriously)

[rky mdna]

Long story short, I'm working on my final project (a 15-page script) for a screenwriting class, but I have yet to come up with a good ending. In fact, thewhole thing isn't good, but it's too late for that.

NT HELP ME COME UP WITH AN ENDING:
this is the basic plot
-new york city in 1995
-jim (main character) is in love with this girl, elly
-one afternoon, they are hanging out on the coney island boardwalk and she suggests to him that he takes 2 tabs of e
-he does it for her
-she then tell him she has to go see her boyfriend, rory
-abandoned and worried cause of the e he just took, jim tries to reach his best friend, alex, but he isnt home
-the guy who jim thinks is elly' boyfriend, rory, runs into jim at astroland and saves him cause he's tripping pretty hard
-rory takes jim to some loft to hang out
-while he's in the bathroom throwing up and having a bit of a break down, jim hears elly outside the bathroom htelling some dude "don't worry.he's fine" (so she's with someone who is concerned about what she did to jim)
-jim opens the door ready to spit at at elly, but sees his best friend, alex, with her and spits on him
-jim freaks out and then goes on the roof of the loft and he's walking along the perimeter and then elly comes up to talk to him

what should i do now???

 

[kicktionair]

Pulls out a knife and stabs her but not before

Chuck Norris pops up and stabs him with his own knife then while he is about to die falls on top of her and stabs her in the right titie

A-

 

[juggy4805]

Originally Posted by Rky Mdna

Long story short, I'm working on my final project (a 15-page script) for a screenwriting class, but I have yet to come up with a good ending. In fact, the whole thing isn't good, but it's too late for that.

NT HELP ME COME UP WITH AN ENDING:
this is the basic plot
-new york city in 1995
-jim (main character) is in love with this girl, elly
-one afternoon, they are hanging out on the coney island boardwalk and she suggests to him that he takes 2 tabs of e
-he does it for her
-she then tell him she has to go see her boyfriend, rory
-abandoned and worried cause of the e he just took, jim tries to reach his best friend, alex, but he isnt home
-the guy who jim thinks is elly' boyfriend, rory, runs into jim at astroland and saves him cause he's tripping pretty hard
-rory takes jim to some loft to hang out
-while he's in the bathroom throwing up and having a bit of a break down, jim hears elly outside the bathroom htelling some dude "don't worry. he's fine" (so she's with someone who is concerned about what she did to jim)
-jim opens the door ready to spit at at elly, but sees his best friend, alex, with her and spits on him
-jim freaks out and then goes on the roof of the loft and he's walking along the perimeter and then elly comes up to talk to him

what should i do now???

Nevermind

 

[j dilla himself]

Originally Posted by juggy4805

Originally Posted by Rky Mdna

Long story short, I'm working on my final project (a 15-page script) for a screenwriting class, but I have yet to come up with a good ending. In fact, the whole thing isn't good, but it's too late for that.

NT HELP ME COME UP WITH AN ENDING:
this is the basic plot
-new york city in 1995
-jim (main character) is in love with this girl, elly
-one afternoon, they are hanging out on the coney island boardwalk and she suggests to him that he takes 2 tabs of e
-he does it for her
-she then tell him she has to go see her boyfriend, rory
-abandoned and worried cause of the e he just took, jim tries to reach his best friend, alex, but he isnt home
-the guy who jim thinks is elly' boyfriend, rory, runs into jim at astroland and saves him cause he's tripping pretty hard
-rory takes jim to some loft to hang out
-while he's in the bathroom throwing up and having a bit of a break down, jim hears elly outside the bathroom htelling some dude "don't worry. he's fine" (so she's with someone who is concerned about what she did to jim)
-jim opens the door ready to spit at at elly, but sees his best friend, alex, with her and spits on him
-jim freaks out and then goes on the roof of the loft and he's walking along the perimeter and then elly comes up to talk to him

what should i do now???

Nevermind

^yea you better had said nevermind..that response you made was ******ed

 

[juggy4805]

Originally Posted by J Dilla Himself

Originally Posted by juggy4805

Originally Posted by Rky Mdna

Long story short, I'm working on my final project (a 15-page script) for a screenwriting class, but I have yet to come up with a good ending. In fact, the whole thing isn't good, but it's too late for that.

NT HELP ME COME UP WITH AN ENDING:
this is the basic plot
-new york city in 1995
-jim (main character) is in love with this girl, elly
-one afternoon, they are hanging out on the coney island boardwalk and she suggests to him that he takes 2 tabs of e
-he does it for her
-she then tell him she has to go see her boyfriend, rory
-abandoned and worried cause of the e he just took, jim tries to reach his best friend, alex, but he isnt home
-the guy who jim thinks is elly' boyfriend, rory, runs into jim at astroland and saves him cause he's tripping pretty hard
-rory takes jim to some loft to hang out
-while he's in the bathroom throwing up and having a bit of a break down, jim hears elly outside the bathroom htelling some dude "don't worry. he's fine" (so she's with someone who is concerned about what she did to jim)
-jim opens the door ready to spit at at elly, but sees his best friend, alex, with her and spits on him
-jim freaks out and then goes on the roof of the loft and he's walking along the perimeter and then elly comes up to talk to him

what should i do now???

Nevermind

^yea you better had said nevermind..that response you made was ******ed

Better?

 

[milestailsprowe]

Jim should confess to Elly only to be turned down and jumps on off the off to a fireescape while running down the block and around the corner

 

[rky mdna]

Kicktionair is winning.

 

[r0yalty]

Cliffnotes?

 

[j dilla himself]

Jim confesses to elly though right?..then elly friendzones him and he jumps..all of a sudden at the last second you see alex's hand reach for Jim's armand he tries to pull him up..to no avail, though

...they both end up falling..dead(god bless the dead)



elly goes to the funeral crying her eyes out, knowing it was her fault.

(they both happen to be jewish so they just put them in the same casket to save some bread)

later that night, she pops a couple E pills...then starts crying...she takes more E pills and overdoses..