Recorded a new song (Touch the Sky) Feedback?

Discussion in 'Music' started by genesis2mp, Dec 26, 2009.

  1. genesis2mp

    genesis2mp

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    Just recorded a new track at my boys studio a couple days ago. Not so good equipment so its gonna sound low quality. But from the songs standpoint, let me knowwhat you guys think, and if you got some advice thatll be good.

    Im on the hook and first verse (Genesis) and my boy is second Verse (Ak)

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/704130830e8ffd6c/
     
  2. jiggaman414

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    didnt even listen to it but I know its wack
     
  3. genesis2mp

    genesis2mp

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    So whats the point of you posting? [​IMG][​IMG]
     
  4. nash

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  5. genesis2mp

    genesis2mp

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    ?
     
  6. black leg

    black leg formerly shaqtus92

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    Flow was pretty smooth, I liked it. Pretty good beat too
     
  7. genesis2mp

    genesis2mp

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    Thanks brotha. Anyone else?
     
  8. platinumfunk

    platinumfunk

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    This is hot. And I'm not even down with rap like that.

    The repeating female voice wasn't quite my thing though.
     
  9. genesis2mp

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    Anymore?
     
  10. mikeyfresh21

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    very boring. you sound like you have potential tho
     
  11. naughtywon

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