Recorded a new song (Touch the Sky) Feedback?

[genesis2mp]

Just recorded a new track at my boys studio a couple days ago. Not so good equipment so its gonna sound low quality. But from the songs standpoint, let me knowwhat you guys think, and if you got some advice thatll be good.

Im on the hook and first verse (Genesis) and my boy is second Verse (Ak)

http://www.zshare.net/audio/704130830e8ffd6c/

 

[jiggaman414]

didnt even listen to it but I know its wack

 

[genesis2mp]

Originally Posted by Jiggaman414

didnt even listen to it but I know its wack

So whats the point of you posting?

 

[nash]

Originally Posted by Jiggaman414

didnt even listen to it but I know its wack

 

[genesis2mp]

?

 

[black leg]

Flow was pretty smooth, I liked it. Pretty good beat too

 

[genesis2mp]

Thanks brotha. Anyone else?

 

[platinumfunk]

This is hot. And I'm not even down with rap like that.

The repeating female voice wasn't quite my thing though.

 

[genesis2mp]

Anymore?

 

[mikeyfresh21]

very boring. you sound like you have potential tho

 

[naughtywon]