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Hey. Me and my boys shot this video. Lemme know what you think. We are all up and coming stand up comedians in NYC.
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Not what I expected. I thought this was gonna be some stand up stuff, or even prank vids. I'll need to see more material to give a fair assessment.
I see an element of humor in this vid, but it wasn't funny, per se.
I see an element of humor in this vid, but it wasn't funny, per se.
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fastcash
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Please quit your day job that was superb
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heres his real standup
too stiff onstage...
use both hands more with expressions.... right hand is just dangling 90% of the time...
move your whole body too... telling a joke about something use body language to help audience engage
jokes need a bit of help tho, don't know what to say....
try to find jokes that are funny by themselves.... you can test this on people easily...
then bring a bunch of jokes that are funny individually, and work a story that puts them all in line...
too stiff onstage...
use both hands more with expressions.... right hand is just dangling 90% of the time...
move your whole body too... telling a joke about something use body language to help audience engage
jokes need a bit of help tho, don't know what to say....
try to find jokes that are funny by themselves.... you can test this on people easily...
then bring a bunch of jokes that are funny individually, and work a story that puts them all in line...
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I think you've got a dark sense of humor?
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In all NT love the iphone video was corny. But, your other videos were decent so keep it up.
lobotomybeats
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define "up and coming."
The "I don't want you to laugh....why you laughing?" shtick is pretty hack, man. It's a weak crutch. They know you aren't being genuine. Of course you want them to laugh, you're at a comedy club and you think your stories are funny. I'm not going to crap on your work. Just keep working. You'll find out what stuff works and what doesn't.
The "I don't want you to laugh....why you laughing?" shtick is pretty hack, man. It's a weak crutch. They know you aren't being genuine. Of course you want them to laugh, you're at a comedy club and you think your stories are funny. I'm not going to crap on your work. Just keep working. You'll find out what stuff works and what doesn't.
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Haha... That video of me on stage is over 4 years old.... I was doing comedy for a total of 2 weeks there.... I love the don't quit you day job comments.... haha..
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Haha... That video of me on stage is over 4 years old.... I was doing comedy for a total of 2 weeks there.... Thanks. I'm a lot different now than 4 years ago. All about growth
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post some new material
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Iphone Video took me a minute to get.
You seem very stiff and scared, not scared as in you're afraid, but your body language has you coming off as you're not confident.
Like the iPhone video8 coulda been some Dave Chappelle type ish but you're acting and facial expressions ruined part of it. Most comedians are very animated and wacky (Kevin Hart, Dave Chappelle, Kat Williams, etc)
Just work on your delivery, your material seems fine to me.
Best of luck
You seem very stiff and scared, not scared as in you're afraid, but your body language has you coming off as you're not confident.
Like the iPhone video8 coulda been some Dave Chappelle type ish but you're acting and facial expressions ruined part of it. Most comedians are very animated and wacky (Kevin Hart, Dave Chappelle, Kat Williams, etc)
Just work on your delivery, your material seems fine to me.
Best of luck
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I thought it was a clever premise because I've seen the iPhone ads, it was just executed poorly. But keep going fam.
