The Fight

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A friend of mine approached me with his story and I normally don't do a lot of free work but this story really resonated with me and i've been spending a lot of time and money on this and hopefully it motivates and inspires people to just follow their dream. He has never fought in a ring before and I really think that this journey will be very inspiring/entertaining. 

Any thoughts, suggestions, concerns?



 
 
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Your editing work has stepped up for sure. Nice work op. Always great to see how someone comes along in their craft.

But the intro I didn't like, something was off. Sorry I can't make a suggestion.
 
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