True Hip Hop Fans.. You Need to Mess with Me on this One!

[christopherave]

Its a very abstract song basically first verse is about finding that right one, the second is about letting that one go, and the third is about being alonewithout that one... this one's for today's hip hop fans!


feedback is appreciated

 

[dune0]

it sounds kinda like bow wow.

 

[christopherave]

young bow wow or present bow wow.. cuz young bow wow was rippin it

 

[darealnoreaga]

Not bad , pretty good

 

[dune0]

Originally Posted by ChristopherAve

young bow wow or present bow wow.. cuz young bow wow was rippin it

present bow wow

 

[christopherave]

anything else..

 

[mideastbeast]

Sorry, I didn't like it.

 

[christopherave]

Bow Wow in his Prime

 

[darealnoreaga]

bow wow is better than u




now









back then








in the future

 

[christopherave]

change that shh eddo.. or i aint gonna talk to you no more!

 

[madfreshyo]

kinda sounds like BW
I'm not really into the fast flow
keep practices tho

 

[thunderchunk69]

I can tell you practice
your lyrics are too simple but the flow is there. better than most people that post their music here.

 

[purplehazze96]

yea you can flow, probably just the song but that's just not what im looking for as far as subject material goes

 

[christopherave]

the last verse..

I.. I.. I..
I know what you thinkin' now
you.. you.. you.. you
you think im in denial
you.. see me with my ghastly smile
and you think, Im a petafile
touching on things of dreams and such
time over time turns time to dust
switch up topics like double dutch
tried to be a baller but i fumble too much
No protection, should have wrapped it up tight
before the devils and the demons blinded my sight
took the dark and made it bright
so when i walk to light my body took flight
Now Im dead like the presidents
and my residence is just images
of how really great livin is..
uh, uh, i mean was..
Cause my membership is expired
meaning Im retired..
Hip hop was the girl but she clocked me out
but, but, she's gone now..

 

[atlien seeko]

Good track homey. I'm honestly feeling it. Keep it up and one day... You'll definately be better than Bow Wow... Excuese me... Bow*

 

[daytona 5000]

I'm not going to front this track was

stick to making songs not those wack video blogs

 

[agthekid]

Sound like that dude that rapped in B2K.

 

[christopherave]

Originally Posted by DAYTONA 5000

I'm not going to front this track was

stick to making songs not those wack video blogs

yeah just trying to do everything possible to get noticed.. aint a superficial thing, just networking

 

[bboy1827]

Joint was straight, alot of hate going on in this thread but I like the song.

 

[christopherave]

thanks for the support dudes, its real

of you