VENTILATION FREESTYLE *FEEDBACK*

if you indeed freestyled then it was ok because you stayed on track with the beat but the subject matter should have been different to go with the mellowness of the instrumental

the first 13 seconds had me vibing to what you had to say but you came in too quick with the smashn girl talk either that or it didnt blend in too well
 
if you indeed freestyled then it was ok because you stayed on track with the beat but the subject matter should have been different to go with the mellowness of the instrumental

the first 13 seconds had me vibing to what you had to say but you came in too quick with the smashn girl talk either that or it didnt blend in too well
 
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