+1.
Some suggestions:
1. Be consistent. You first called the patch on the jacket 'pleather' then you switched to 'leather'. (Correct me if I'm wrong, but I'm sure I heard that).
2. If you're going to talk about the brands, know about the brands (referring to the vest).
3. If you want to describe the fabrics, know the fabrics (and not just say that classic vest material).
4. That is not a dress shirt, it is a sports shirt.
5. Matching is highly overrated, coordination is where it's at. You don't need to have every single colors match with your shoes.
6. An outfit video should not be 4+ mins long. I'm sure you can do it in 2 mins or so if you plan it. It appears you winged it since you got lost a lot, which brings me to the next point..
7. Keep vulgarity to the minimum, you will turn off some demographics. I assume your objective is to get the most views possible so yep.
Thanks for participating in the thread