NT,check out my verses to Dead Presidents!

[jrocknikerock]

Wussup NT im a rapper/singer from Houston,Texas. Just trying to get my music out there and move ahead in the music industry. Hope you like it. Been rappin formaybe a year now. Started writing not so long ago, started off just freestyling. Completed a 12 track mixtape this year, which you can listen to most of themat the myspace link below. Just me going on a bunch of popular beats that i like. I need to start making my own beats.

You can check out my music at

Myspace.com/TLeeDaMc

or my Youtube.

Comments are appreciated. I'm Asian,if that matters.



Thanks NT check the ending of the vid

 

[certifiedflyboi23]

You sound like ur reading...

plus..

If you hop on a beat like Dead Presidents you gotta come harder(pause)

 

[ham city]

*cues last 30 seconds of J. Cole's "Lights Please"*

 

[dreamhigh]

ohhhhh nooooo nothing personal but uh uh

 

[jrocknikerock]

CertifiedFlyBoi2 i see what you mean.

and dream high... ignorant comment.

 

[burt reynoldz]

No bueno

 

[naughtywon]

lol ur doubles aint sposed to b that damn loud...

u suck...

dont rhyme fad sad and had...

step it up big time or quit...

 

[Master Zik]

Stop.

 

[imreallydirknowitzki]

Very Monotone, you need to change up your delivery and get some energy.

 

[miketysonthekiller]

You sound mad monotone brah. PUT SOME FEELING ON THAT $!%!.

 

[lilstarz07]

stopped it after "limelight alright, alright" ...

 

[clevelandsprince23]

Yep yep you sounded monotone as @$%! man... still ok tho

keep doin' your thing man 713 ya heardddddddddd

 

[thejrob]

Your voice is real monotune
Your rhymes are real simple
Your word play is non existent

With that being said keep it up man, if its what you like to do then keep working on it...

 

[domc03]

you have a voice made for writing...

 

[moeree5e]

Originally Posted by domc03

you have a voice made for writing...

i hear what you did there

 

[bluedeniro]

theres a book called the art of rapping i gave my lil cousin you should buy that book withing a year you'll be rapping like lil zane

 

[playoff12]

I like the meaning behind the song and keep doing your thang homie.

Throw in some emotion, attitude, and a touch of swag and it'd be dope.

 

[jrocknikerock]

dam...i see what yall mean.

Delivery has always been my big weakness. Another thing is the quality. The low budget studio doesn't have the mic personally mixed for me.
So I always sound low and not how I actually sound. smh. But again I need to work on the sound of it all. Thanks NT.

I was on the phone with a upcoming record label the other day and they're gonna listen to my mixtape and if they like me, they will let me start makingsongs in their high quality master studio. If I get on, I'll redo the song forsure.

Thanks for the comments NT,appreciated.