this is hip hop!!!!!!!!!....

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no offense, the first song sounds like a weak lullaby so i didn't bother listening to the second one sorry fam
 

devildog1776

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Originally Posted by MoneyMike703

no offense, the first song sounds like a weak lullaby so i didn't bother listening to the second one sorry fam

sorry that i make good music... go listen to waka floca ,"jew mang" or something... carry on
 
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Mane Im gonna try not to be negative but u cant be criticizing other people who have a fanbase when you cant make a decent song yet.

Your lyrics were ok you were atleast trying to say something. Overall it was simple lines but atleast you werent talking about shooting people and being fresh. But your flow is :X You gotta learn how to find the beat man that was hard to listen too forreal.

You sound like you want to be an elitist 90s hip hop fan but that "This Is Hip Hop" track sounds like a Soulja Boy song back when was just starting to rap.
 
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Originally Posted by devildog1776

Originally Posted by MoneyMike703

no offense, the first song sounds like a weak lullaby so i didn't bother listening to the second one sorry fam

sorry that i make good music... go listen to waka floca ,"jew mang" or something... carry on
waka floca?, nah i aint into his stuff but atleast he has a better ear for beats than you do
, im a j.cole fan btw
 
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@ the replies

Cartune going in with the honesty


I was in the thread before but I'm actually going to listen now.
 
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Originally Posted by devildog1776

Originally Posted by General Johnson

Nah, I'm good.

You ain't fooling me twice with that bull %**% again. How long have you been rapping?
fooling you twice??? 
Yeah, I gave your music a chance before and that $!#$ was terrible.

You really need to find a new hobby. Rap isn't for you.
 
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Originally Posted by General Johnson

Nah, I'm good.

You ain't fooling me twice with that bull %**% again. How long have you been rapping?
I don't know why but this made me laugh
 
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Originally Posted by KrazyChino

Ya'll are brutal man...

nah...he brought it on his own stupid self...shoulda just been like "hey give me some feedback on my new track", not none of this "THIS IS HIP HIP" "IF YOU DONT LIKE IT YOU STUPID" BS..
 
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*gives it a listen*



(undistinguishable) remind em of what hip hop used to be
You know, Daddy Kane, Rakim, Kool G
I'm fresh air to an astronaut
The haves and the have-nots
I spit scenic views from the crack pots
I watch fiends guzzle 40s, gone in 60 seconds
Stepped over by these lying @*% adolescents
So now I hurdle tracks and sprint past competitors
REWRITE YOUR WHOLE 16, I'm the editor

I write rhymes for the rappers that's past they prime
I do this for extra bread like overtime
You see me in the streets, I'm probably by myself
I'm not a product, don't point at me like top shelf
I'm the heir to the throne, homey, Prince Hakeem
Hip hop's own Dr. King, this my dream
I rap for listeners with hip hop intelligence
Appreciate the finer rhymes of life
You're irrelevant

Hook:

1,2 This is hip hop
3,4 This is hip hop

Turntables, headphones, microphone, check
You can play now, but I got next

x2

That's where I stopped.


What's up with the sleigh bells, nursery rhyme beat and tripled layered lyrics?

You sound iffy on your presence like you're about to cry in the booth. Did the song make you sad?
 
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at these replies ... i see you at least trying to talk about something different.. but you got a cheesy hook on a song trying to save "hip hop"
so it is kinda ironic .. but only god can judge you so do you fam
 
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