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Drop the "likes" and "umms" as fillers and your spacing will be a lot better. Good job for having the confidence to get out there.
I'm a New Comedian- Help Me Out-Update-New Vid Page 1-Time Square Comedy
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If your first time I would say it was good. I have watched TONS of comedy and I feel like I am really good at it....I love unexpected comedy but I felt like you did good. I like how you kept a serious face when you would talk about ur stories. First half of the skit was okay....didn't really laugh but it wasn't boring either. The second half you picked up when talking about living rent free....honestly the part that made me laugh was when you mentioned ur girl wanted to sleep at 6:30 and you just woke up at 4:30....that made me laugh b/c it caught me off guard.
I commend you for doing this....All my family and friends have told me that I need to do stand-up but my problem is I don't like routine....I am more of improv type where I say whatever comes to my mind but I usually find funny stuff to say.
Keep it up...I know how nerve racking it can be but eventually you just have to get on a roll.....good luck
I commend you for doing this....All my family and friends have told me that I need to do stand-up but my problem is I don't like routine....I am more of improv type where I say whatever comes to my mind but I usually find funny stuff to say.
Keep it up...I know how nerve racking it can be but eventually you just have to get on a roll.....good luck
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If your first time I would say it was good. I have watched TONS of comedy and I feel like I am really good at it....I love unexpected comedy but I felt like you did good. I like how you kept a serious face when you would talk about ur stories. First half of the skit was okay....didn't really laugh but it wasn't boring either. The second half you picked up when talking about living rent free....honestly the part that made me laugh was when you mentioned ur girl wanted to sleep at 6:30 and you just woke up at 4:30....that made me laugh b/c it caught me off guard.
I commend you for doing this....All my family and friends have told me that I need to do stand-up but my problem is I don't like routine....I am more of improv type where I say whatever comes to my mind but I usually find funny stuff to say.
Keep it up...I know how nerve racking it can be but eventually you just have to get on a roll.....good luck
I commend you for doing this....All my family and friends have told me that I need to do stand-up but my problem is I don't like routine....I am more of improv type where I say whatever comes to my mind but I usually find funny stuff to say.
Keep it up...I know how nerve racking it can be but eventually you just have to get on a roll.....good luck
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LeClutch and OGMIKEY thanks and lmao. I said the same thing when I watched the dvd... The umms and likes have to go asap.... Doctor thanks I appreciate it.
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I will watch after work and give detailed feedback after work (**taught a speech class a few years back)
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I will watch after work and give detailed feedback after work (**taught a speech class a few years back)
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LeClutch and OGMIKEY thanks and lmao. I said the same thing when I watched the dvd... The umms and likes have to go asap.... Doctor thanks I appreciate it.
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not bad at all
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not bad at all
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Spoiler [+]
edit:"I thought it was a trick question ,you know i don't pay #$%^"
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Spoiler [+]
edit:"I thought it was a trick question ,you know i don't pay #$%^"
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pretty good, alot better than i thought.
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pretty good, alot better than i thought.
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i'll check it out after work
at having an NT comic though
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i'll check it out after work
at having an NT comic though
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i was
quite a bit.
i thought the funniest part was when you would tell a story and people would laugh and you get mad at 'em because "that %#** is serious, it is a part of my life. this isn't funny."
i thought the funniest part was when you would tell a story and people would laugh and you get mad at 'em because "that %#** is serious, it is a part of my life. this isn't funny."
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i was
quite a bit.
i thought the funniest part was when you would tell a story and people would laugh and you get mad at 'em because "that %#** is serious, it is a part of my life. this isn't funny."
i thought the funniest part was when you would tell a story and people would laugh and you get mad at 'em because "that %#** is serious, it is a part of my life. this isn't funny."
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%$++ wit me bro, check your pms
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%$++ wit me bro, check your pms
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Guys forreal forreal thanks I honestly appreciate this... My girl said I can talk all this s#*t I want as long as I make ppl laugh. To any Niketalker that wants to get into it... I say go for it cause it's a great feeling to go on stage.
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Guys forreal forreal thanks I honestly appreciate this... My girl said I can talk all this s#*t I want as long as I make ppl laugh. To any Niketalker that wants to get into it... I say go for it cause it's a great feeling to go on stage.
