trying to make a song...

[superman22938]

so ive never had any experience with music production (you can probably tell) but i downloaded mixcraft 5 and was just messing around with it, and i came up with this. its only 20 seconds long (so i guess it could be an intro?) but i have no idea where to go with it.....
just trying to get some opinions on whether its good or bad.

be good to us.mp3 - 0.54MB

 

[superman22938]

so ive never had any experience with music production (you can probably tell) but i downloaded mixcraft 5 and was just messing around with it, and i came up with this. its only 20 seconds long (so i guess it could be an intro?) but i have no idea where to go with it.....
just trying to get some opinions on whether its good or bad.

be good to us.mp3 - 0.54MB