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To be honest, it's far too wordy and has way too much unnecessary information to be taken seriously.
To whom it may concern,
Upon entering your store on 1155 Connecticut Ave Washington, DC I found to my surprise that I was completely ignored by your staff, while others that did not share my black skin tone received service promptly. I felt as though, because I am black, I was treated as a lower class shopper, incapable of making a real purchase. As a 49 year old woman, I like to think that I am capable of accurately sensing prejudice by now. The situation made me feel marginalized and stereotyped.
Something like that would be more appropriate.